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Twilight's Web, Templejack at the Fair

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Though Twilight’s and Rarity’s threats of her starving if she refused to help Rainbow Dash frightened her during their designated moments, Applejack had just about enough of their demands once told she had to accompany them to the fair. Of course Rarity was quite persuasive knowing the gluttonous orange pony’s weakness for food. All it took was a short song and dance portraying the wonders the fair would present to a pony like her to get her flank inside Rainbow’s pen and hide under the hay as they drove off. Though the mundane task of waiting was just as irksome as fetching words for Twilight’s web, Applejack’s patience was finally rewarded as night blanketed the sky.Climbing to the top of the gate closing the larger pen housing Rainbow for the day, she inspected the fairgrounds. The moon shined brightly with not a cloud in the sky, revealing in its glorious light all the splendorous bounties it brought forth.


“Rarity was right,” said Applejack, licking her chops and clapping her hooves in amazement, “this fair is a pony’s paradise. Bye bye mah humble Rainbow. Fair thee well Twilight, ya ole schemer. This will be a night to remember!”


With an anxious leap the miniature mare ran to the closest thing she was certain to find food a plenty: a garbage can. She only gathered up the finest of what she could find which didn’t seem like much, but more than she ever ate from Rainbow’s meals back on the farm. Hopping out the can with food in her arms and towering over her hat, she sang her and Rarity’s gleeful song about her gluttonous escapade.


“A fair is a veritable smorgasbord, orgasbord, orgasbord, after the crowds have ceased.” Running by a wedge of cheese, AJ picked it up with her tail and tossed it on the pile she carried. “Each night when the lights go out it can be found, on the ground, all around, oh what a ponyly feast!”


Stopping atop of a melon rind she popped all she had gathered into her mouth. Swallowing everything with no effort at all and smiling as her belly filled up. Juggling a few food scraps in her hooves, she then tossed them up in the air and caught them in her mouth. Afterwards she cartwheeled over to a sausage, slice of bread, and an open jar of mayonnaise. Stepping on the sausage she expertly flicked it into the air, quickly dabbed the bread slice with mayonnaise using a spoon within the jar, and caught the sausage on the bread all before swallowing it down whole. By far it was the largest thing she had ever eaten in one gulp, but still she hungered for more.


“Melon rinds an’ bits of hot dogs, cookie crumbs an’ tons of cotton candy. Melted ice cream, mustard drippings, multi goodies everywhere.”


Speedily dashing up a table she hopped on a basket to devour a chicken leg. In rapid succession she wolfed down an entire bag of popcorn, spun a whole apple around and ate it down to its core, and pogoed across the table top using a fork; filling the fork until she couldn’t stick anymore onto it. Then finding a slope of junk she could slide down, she spun the fork with her tail, hopped to the top and slid down as the food flung itself into her awaiting mouth. Stylishly she caught each piece of cheese, fruit, meat, and veggies, reaching the bottom with a smile on her face and her hooves crossed behind her head.


“Lots of popcorn, apple cores, banana peels an’, soggy sandwiches an’ lots gorgeous gook to gobble at the fair!”


Belly quite pudgy by this point, she wasn’t guzzling down enough food to truly satiate her gluttonous appetite. Picking up a nearby spoon, she scrambled through nearby trash cans and around the table; scooping up any and all bits of food she could find into a large pile. Growing in height as she was in appetite, it ominously teetered as she added one too many veggies. On the fulcrum of collapsing, she panicked as it grew too late for her to save it. Acting on impulse she dashed in the direction the tower of food fell. Expertly she caught all she could in her mouth. Her throat muscles swallowing quickly in order to make room for the next morsel. While running down the table, she failed to notice half of a watermelon she planned to eat after demolishing the tower. An imprint of herself plastered the outside as she collided with it. Immediately recognizing where she was, she truly allowed herself to let go. Rapidly slurping up the sweet red inside and spitting out the seeds, the melon rind collapsed on top of her like a deflated balloon. Then to finish things off she vacuumed the entire rind into her mouth. Leaving only a chubby pony in its place.


Though it was mostly water after being left out for some time, it certainly reflected on her body. For the first time in her life, she had finally eaten enough food to be able to rest her hooves on top of her own belly. Spilling out in front of her, it nearly folded itself over her legs. Gurgling as it attempted to digest everything it had taken in, it wasn’t nearly as full as AJ wanted it to be. Wasting no more time she stood back up and wobbled back to ground level where she ate whatever she could grab her hooves on.


Gulping down fries, bacon, and sausages she sat beside a perfectly intact buttery corn on a cob. Happily she munched on each individual kernel from left to right. Once reaching the end she would flick it back with her tail to restart the process in typewriter fashion. Belly bouncing along as she rampantly ran gathering food, she found herself on top of some wire with light bulbs attached overseeing a hotdog stand. Wolfing down what she was carrying and looking below, she daringly dived into a pitcher of yellow liquid; making quite the splash. The taste was nothing like she ever had but proved tantalizing enough to submerge herself.


Practically drowning in the golden ocean, a bubble formed around her, lifting her out of the pitcher to her freedom. Though she was unable to finish all of it, the amount she drank made her quite tipsy, causing a sloppy grin to crease on her face. Eventually the bubble did burst, dropping her sizeable rump atop of a large unpeeled banana and catapulting it into the air. Dazly looking up, her gluttony compelled her to open wide. In the blink of an eye the banana went down the hatch; all of it within her enormous gut. The sheer force at which it landed inside her belly caused it thrust her limbs outward as it momentarily squished against her face like an airbag. She regained her composure as she released a hearty hiccup and allowing herself a moment of pause for her belly to analyze just what it had taken in.


Stomach bloated up to her face, she was barely able to rest her hooves on the top. Her hind legs were split apart in order to make way for her massive swell to rest itself in between them. Fatter than she could ever dream of being, the feeling of having such a rich well fed gut made her sloppy grin even wider. Accidentally she hiccuped once more, lifting both hooves from her belly in order to cover her mouth. Her redistribution of weight caused herself to slightly lean backwards giving momentum the chance it needed to pin her under her own weight. Having a mind of its own, her belly sloshed on top of her. Jolly at being able to nuzzle her own gorge pressing against her face, she daintily tried pushing it away. Once it reached its apex it shifted toward her front, pulling her into a standing position at the cost of her belly folding and squishing against her haunches. It didn’t bother her however, as having a belly as fat and round as hers was as great a reward as she deserved for putting up with Twilight and Rainbow for so long. Blithely enjoying the fruits of her labor, she recited the final lyrics of Rarity’s song.


“A fair...is a veritable smorgasbord...orgasbord...orgasbord...after the gates, are shut! *Hic hilp*. Each night, when the lights...go out it can be found, on the ground, all around! That’s...where a pony...can...glut...glut...glut...glut!”


Once her hind legs were free from sloshing in the opposite direction, the weight of her belly pulled her forward forcing her to grab a tablecloth to keep her balance. Failing miserably, the pile of food that rained down on her was enough to help her stand up again. Too lost in her ecstasy to contemplate eating it, she reveled in the rapture that was the fair. Throwing her forehooves into the air and gleefully spinning around, thrusting her gut outward for all the world to sink in. It was then she was able to admire just how over gorged she truly was, which made her even happier. Singing and carrying her globe like gut with pride, she ran off into the night. Hiccuping and soaking in her new life as a fat pony.


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Morning rose over the fairgrounds as Applejack dragged her way back to Rainbow’s pen. Still drunk from last nights proceedings, the banana certainly wasn’t where her gorging ended. It would’ve been a sin as a glutton to leave such monumentally delectable treats uneaten as she walked by. Even the pile that fell on top of her was revisited and now found a perfect home inside her belly. Speaking of which, she had grown so incredibly stuffed that her rump and haunches couldn’t keep up with its growth. Balance became a great issue and soon forced her to crawl flat on her belly. Of course, this didn’t stop her from pulling herself toward further eating. Only the rising sun called for her attendance back in Rainbow’s housing for a long nap; lest she be exposed out on the fairgrounds for malevolent eyes.


Reaching the pen’s gate, she groaned as she poked her chubby face over the lowest board. Through her dazed vision she could see Twilight and Rainbow conversing with one another. Too over gorged to care however, she released a hefty hiccup announcing her arrival. “*Hic-hilp* I’m back.”


Noticing her return, they slowly approached her. Stopping as she arduously climbed over the board and revealing her now massively wide belly, back, and rump. “What a night,” she woozily declared before landing on the hay covered floor with a vociferous squelch; squashing everything she had eaten the night before against one another. “Never have I seen such leavin’s.”


Pulling herself toward rainbow, her upper body dragged along and waited for her swollen lower half to catch up, stretching long and short much like an accordion. Following each dragging motion was yet another glorp from her stomach, as well as her hind legs kicking at the end of a drag. “Everythin’ well ripen’d, season’d with the passage of time an’ the heat of the day. Oh it was rich mah friends,” Applejack’s belly uproariously sloshed as she rolled over, resting against Rainbow’s foreleg, “Rich! *Hic hilp*!”


As blithe as Applejack was about her weight gain, Twilight felt oppositely toward it. “You ought to be ashamed of yourself. It’ll serve you right if you had an acute attack of indigestion.”


Hat covering her gaze as she closed her eyes in rest, AJ withheld a hiccup and heartily smacked her stomach from top to middle. “Don’t worry about mah stumach. It can handle anythin’.”


“Applejack,” spoke Rainbow, “If you weren’t so dopey, you’d notice Twilight made an egg sac.”


Lifting her hat and straining her dazed eyes, she leaned forward in order to get a better look of the egg sac. It was a fuzzy little white ball way up in the corner of the rafters. Too little for her to plainly see, and too little to care. Releasing a hiccup, she pat her belly. “Hooray fer Twilight.”


“She’s going to be a mother. For your information, there are five hundred and fourteen eggs in that peachy little sac.”


“This has been a night,” said the fat orange orb with a groaning tone. Kicking her plump hind legs forward, her belly erupted in a chorus of sloshes as she rolled forward and pulled her way back into Rainbow’s pen. Inside she threw a blanket of straw over herself and retired for the day. But not before releasing yet another boisterous hiccup to remind them she was still here, despite being rid of her for the rest of the morning.


*Hic hilp*!


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epilogue...


Following the passing of Twilight and Applejack agreeing to take down her egg sac to have first dibs on Rainbow’s meals, the gluttonous pony took full advantage of their deal. Visiting Rainbow three times a day for mealtime all through winter and the coming of spring. Greedily she stuffed her face until she couldn’t swallow another hooffull before relinquishing the remains to Rainbow. As a result of overeating she grew fatter than any pony had ever seen. Too fat to sleep in her old hole in the ground and instead having to move to a more spacious place behind the grain bins in the barn.


Her legs grew thick and puffy, her cheeks chubby, waist wide, rump round, and belly so full of blubber it bounced around with every laborious step she took back to her bed behind the bins. Waddling from the trough and back to the barn was the only exercise she ever got. Sometimes it was tiring just to swallow what she crammed into her mouth. But despite it all, being as fat a pony as she was, she wouldn’t have it anyother way.


One day fluttershy came over during one of AJ’s meals to voice her thoughts on her size. “Um...Applejack? I don’t want to sound pushy or anything, but you know, you’d live a bit longer if you ate less.”


Swallowing what she stuffed in her cheeks, Applejack sneered at her. “Who wants ta live ferever? I’m naturally a heavy eater, and take untold satisfaction of the feast.” She had just about enough food for the day. Producing a snide grin, Applejack patted her tremendous stomach, and slowly waddled away. Fat rippling and jostling with each step she took. More of a prize winning pumpkin than an apple now, her squishy form was all the company she needed. A real butterball she was, spending most of her days eating, sleeping, and massaging her burbling belly. Even her little mirror she hung up in her new home revealed her more corpulent features; if she stood far enough away of course. Today was no different. Before her sleep she rubbed her soft glorping expanse. Stuffed to the brim and over gorged a few times over. But it would be nothing compared to her next visit to the fair this year. Her gorging greatly served as a training regimen. For when she returns, she’d be able to win the blue ribbon herself.
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This story was strictly for fun purposes and to get me back into the groove of writing. Sorry if it lacks quality from my previous writings.

So, this story is basically Templeton the Rat's infamous fair weight gain scene but instead replaced by ponies. Twilight plays Charlotte, Rainbow Dash Wilbur, and Applejack Templeton. Each is the appropriate size of the characters they represent. So Applejack and Twilight are mini ponies. If you don't know what mini ponies are check out my inspiration derpibooru.org/358968?scope=sc… . If you can't picture Twilight as a spider pony perhaps this'll help XD collinfatpony.deviantart.com/a… . If you don't know who Templeton is tell me and I'll be happy to educate you :meow:.

I know some of the lyrics of the song were slightly changed. I just didn't want it to sound as rotten since AJ is just a mini pony and not really a rat XD. I've written Templeton's fair scene, after fair scene, and his book ending where he's basically a big fat slob XD. I made Rainbow Wilbur because I hate her ;), just as I hate the pig also.

Synopsis Applejack goes to the county fair with Twilight and Rainbow where she was promised a treasure trove of food. She waits until night then chows down on all she could get her hooves on.

If you've gotten this far in reading the description I've been thinking about writing a series of fat Applejack mini pony like Templeton's Big Adventure on writing.com (if you know what that is). Basically she goes on constant weight gain outings getting fatter after each chapter. I'd appreciate to hear what you might think of this.
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Mlp-CandyFilly's avatar
Wow, sweet reanactment! But now I kinda wish someone would do the rest of the movie…